I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Jasmine and Tiannah, I love your background the wave part, and your writing is really interesting I like the part when you drove to the beach really fast and the part when you said the sunglasses you wore made everything go orange. I have a question were did you get the idea of doing a peace of writing about the beach? Have a great day. Luisapeta
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Jasmine and Tiannah,
ReplyDeleteI love your background the wave part, and your writing is really interesting I like the part when you drove to the beach really fast and the part when you said the sunglasses you wore made everything go orange. I have a question were did you get the idea of doing a peace of writing about the beach?
Have a great day.
Luisapeta