I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Jasmine, I really like your work it is so cool I really like your background but there is a little problem I can't watch your srceencastify it says you need permeation to watch the video. Also your "I" needs to be capital. Hope you can fix those mistakes have a great day, Luisapeta
Hi Jasmine I so enjoyed reading your information slides on the pyramids of Giza - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work it is so cool I really like your background but there is a little problem I can't watch your srceencastify it says you need permeation to watch the video. Also your "I" needs to be capital.
Hope you can fix those mistakes have a great day,
Luisapeta
thank you for commenting on my blog
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ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed reading your information slides on the pyramids of Giza - one of the wonders of the world. Good work. I will be looking forward to reading your blog posts over the holidays. Ka Pai.
thank you Manpreet for commenting on my blog and i hoped you would check my prymiads of giza i hpoe you have a good Hoildays and Christmas
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