I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Jasmine, thank you for sharing your report about New Zealand in the Olympics. I wonder whether any of our Olympians were inspired but Sir Edmund Hillary? You have used question marks, commas and apostrophes very well. Next time I would like you to double check for full stops and capital letters.
Tena koe Jasmine, its Ruqayat from your class. I think that your report is very informative and interesting. I learnt a lot about New Zealand thanks to your report. Keep up the good work.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Jasmine, thank you for sharing your report about New Zealand in the Olympics. I wonder whether any of our Olympians were inspired but Sir Edmund Hillary? You have used question marks, commas and apostrophes very well. Next time I would like you to double check for full stops and capital letters.
ReplyDeleteTena koe Jasmine, its Ruqayat from your class. I think that your report is very informative and interesting. I learnt a lot about New Zealand thanks to your report. Keep up the good work.
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Ruqayat